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A deeper structural diagnosis for writers who need clarity before moving into a major revision.
Best for: a partial manuscript, substantial opening, or developed outline with structural questions.
You send:
A synopsis or outline
The first 15,000–20,000 words of your manuscript
A character list
Your central mystery or story question
Three to five areas where you feel stuck
You receive:
An 8–12 page editorial report
Premise and genre-positioning assessment
Mystery-engine and escalation analysis
Protagonist, stakes, and structural notes
Pacing and reader-momentum feedback
A prioritized revision map
Turnaround: 7 business days
Founding-client rate: $395
Your turnaround begins once I receive your complete materials and confirm that your project fits the service scope.
If your project falls outside the stated scope, I will contact you within one business day to discuss options or issue a refund.
A deeper structural diagnosis for writers who need clarity before moving into a major revision.
Best for: a partial manuscript, substantial opening, or developed outline with structural questions.
You send:
A synopsis or outline
The first 15,000–20,000 words of your manuscript
A character list
Your central mystery or story question
Three to five areas where you feel stuck
You receive:
An 8–12 page editorial report
Premise and genre-positioning assessment
Mystery-engine and escalation analysis
Protagonist, stakes, and structural notes
Pacing and reader-momentum feedback
A prioritized revision map
Turnaround: 7 business days
Founding-client rate: $395
Your turnaround begins once I receive your complete materials and confirm that your project fits the service scope.
If your project falls outside the stated scope, I will contact you within one business day to discuss options or issue a refund.