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Limited number of founding-client slots available through August 31, 2026
Extended Partial-Manuscript Evaluation | 15,000–20,000 words
A deeper partial-manuscript evaluation of your synopsis or outline and the first 15,000–20,000 words. This service examines whether the opening movement establishes a sustainable story engine, effective escalation, meaningful protagonist pressure, appropriate pacing, and a strong genre promise.
Best for: A developed draft with structural questions that extend beyond the first chapter, especially when you need clarity before undertaking a major revision.
Materials Evaluated:
A synopsis or outline
The first 15,000–20,000 words of your manuscript
A character list
Your central mystery or story question
Three to five areas where you feel stuck
See an Example of What You Submit
You receive:
An 8–12 page editorial report
Premise and genre-positioning assessment
Mystery-engine and escalation analysis
Protagonist, stakes, and structural notes
Pacing and reader-momentum feedback
A prioritized revision map
View a Sample Story Diagnostic (PDF)
Turnaround: 7 business days
Limited number of founding-client slots available through August 31, 2026: founding-client rate $395
Your turnaround begins once I receive your complete materials and confirm that your project fits the service scope.
If your project falls outside the stated scope, I will contact you within one business day to discuss options or issue a refund.
Limited number of founding-client slots available through August 31, 2026
Extended Partial-Manuscript Evaluation | 15,000–20,000 words
A deeper partial-manuscript evaluation of your synopsis or outline and the first 15,000–20,000 words. This service examines whether the opening movement establishes a sustainable story engine, effective escalation, meaningful protagonist pressure, appropriate pacing, and a strong genre promise.
Best for: A developed draft with structural questions that extend beyond the first chapter, especially when you need clarity before undertaking a major revision.
Materials Evaluated:
A synopsis or outline
The first 15,000–20,000 words of your manuscript
A character list
Your central mystery or story question
Three to five areas where you feel stuck
See an Example of What You Submit
You receive:
An 8–12 page editorial report
Premise and genre-positioning assessment
Mystery-engine and escalation analysis
Protagonist, stakes, and structural notes
Pacing and reader-momentum feedback
A prioritized revision map
View a Sample Story Diagnostic (PDF)
Turnaround: 7 business days
Limited number of founding-client slots available through August 31, 2026: founding-client rate $395
Your turnaround begins once I receive your complete materials and confirm that your project fits the service scope.
If your project falls outside the stated scope, I will contact you within one business day to discuss options or issue a refund.