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A fast, focused diagnosis for writers who want to know whether their premise and opening pages are creating a compelling reader promise.
Best for: an early draft, opening chapter, stalled project, or story idea that feels promising but unfocused.
You send:
A one-page premise or synopsis
Up to 5,000 opening words
Optional outline or beat summary
Up to three questions you want answered
You receive:
A 4–6 page editorial report
Hook and opening-momentum analysis
Story-question and mystery-engine feedback
Protagonist pressure and stakes notes
Genre-promise assessment
Three to five prioritized revision moves
Turnaround: 72 hours
Founding-client rate: $149
Your turnaround begins once I receive your complete materials and confirm that your project fits the service scope.
If your project falls outside the stated scope, I will contact you within one business day to discuss options or issue a refund.
A fast, focused diagnosis for writers who want to know whether their premise and opening pages are creating a compelling reader promise.
Best for: an early draft, opening chapter, stalled project, or story idea that feels promising but unfocused.
You send:
A one-page premise or synopsis
Up to 5,000 opening words
Optional outline or beat summary
Up to three questions you want answered
You receive:
A 4–6 page editorial report
Hook and opening-momentum analysis
Story-question and mystery-engine feedback
Protagonist pressure and stakes notes
Genre-promise assessment
Three to five prioritized revision moves
Turnaround: 72 hours
Founding-client rate: $149
Your turnaround begins once I receive your complete materials and confirm that your project fits the service scope.
If your project falls outside the stated scope, I will contact you within one business day to discuss options or issue a refund.