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Limited number of founding-client slots available through August 31, 2026
Opening-Pages Manuscript Evaluation | Up to 5,000 words
A focused partial-manuscript evaluation of your premise and first 5,000 words. This service examines whether your opening establishes a compelling hook, clear story question, meaningful protagonist pressure, and convincing genre promise.
Best for: An early or stalled draft when you want expert feedback on the premise and opening chapter before revising further.
Materials Evaluated:
A one-page premise or synopsis
Up to 5,000 opening words
Optional outline or beat summary
Up to three questions you want answered
See an Example of What You Submit
You receive:
A 4–6 page editorial report
Hook and opening-momentum analysis
Story-question and mystery-engine feedback
Protagonist pressure and stakes notes
Genre-promise assessment
Three to five prioritized revision moves
View a Sample Audit (PDF)
Turnaround: 72 hours
Limited number of founding-client slots available through August 31, 2026 : $149 founding-client rate
Your turnaround begins once I receive your complete materials and confirm that your project fits the service scope.
If your project falls outside the stated scope, I will contact you within one business day to discuss options or issue a refund.
Limited number of founding-client slots available through August 31, 2026
Opening-Pages Manuscript Evaluation | Up to 5,000 words
A focused partial-manuscript evaluation of your premise and first 5,000 words. This service examines whether your opening establishes a compelling hook, clear story question, meaningful protagonist pressure, and convincing genre promise.
Best for: An early or stalled draft when you want expert feedback on the premise and opening chapter before revising further.
Materials Evaluated:
A one-page premise or synopsis
Up to 5,000 opening words
Optional outline or beat summary
Up to three questions you want answered
See an Example of What You Submit
You receive:
A 4–6 page editorial report
Hook and opening-momentum analysis
Story-question and mystery-engine feedback
Protagonist pressure and stakes notes
Genre-promise assessment
Three to five prioritized revision moves
View a Sample Audit (PDF)
Turnaround: 72 hours
Limited number of founding-client slots available through August 31, 2026 : $149 founding-client rate
Your turnaround begins once I receive your complete materials and confirm that your project fits the service scope.
If your project falls outside the stated scope, I will contact you within one business day to discuss options or issue a refund.